# 英语中级 · 第 3 周 Day 4｜分饰两角演九十秒电话

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**今天学什么**

昨天记的是「零件」，今天要把零件装成一段能演的电话。方法是一人分饰两角：你说完甲方说乙方，中间不留空白，逼自己在没有对手戏的情况下也能接住话。演三遍，第三遍录音，时长卡在 90 秒。今天的难点不在词，而在停顿——定语从句说长了会断气，说短了又像背书。学会在哪里停、哪里连，这段录音才听得下去。

## 一、今日任务

| 环节 | 时长 | 具体动作 | 产出 |
| --- | --- | --- | --- |
| 选题搭骨架 | 10 min | 从催交付、改期、报阻塞里选一个，写 6 行提纲，不写完整台词 | 6 行提纲 |
| 第 1 遍 | 10 min | 看提纲演，允许卡壳，卡住就换一种说法绕过去 | 第 1 遍 |
| 第 2 遍 | 10 min | 补 2 个定语从句、1 次 read back，压到 90 秒 | 第 2 遍 |
| 第 3 遍录音 | 10 min | 不看稿，计时 90 秒，完整录下来 | 90 秒录音 |
| 回听标注 | 10 min | 标停顿位置、漏掉的词尾、用出的固定说法数量 | 标注记录 |
| 重录开场 | 5 min | 只重录前 15 秒，把开场改短 | 开场片段 |

合计 55 分钟。第 3 遍才是有效产出，前两遍的目的只是让你敢开口，不要一开始就追求完美。

一人分饰两角的关键是「不留白」：问句说完，立刻用另一个声音回答，中间停超过两秒，这段录音就废了。实在接不上，就用 Well, let me think 拖半秒，比沉默自然。

## 二、核心词汇与搭配

| 词 | 音标 | 词性 | 释义 | 高频搭配 | 例句 |
| --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- |
| confirm | /kənˈfɜːm/（≈克恩费姆） | v. | 确认 | confirm sth with sb；confirm by email | Could you confirm the date with the client? 你能和客户确认一下日期吗？ |
| clarify | /ˈklærəfaɪ/（≈克莱若法） | v. | 澄清、说明白 | clarify a point；clarify what you mean | Let me clarify one point before we go on. 继续之前我先澄清一点。 |
| note down | /nəʊt daʊn/ | phr. v. | 记下 | note sth down；note down the details | I've noted down the new delivery date. 我已经记下新的交付日期。 |
| follow up | /ˈfɒləʊ ʌp/ | phr. v. | 跟进 | follow up on sth；follow up with sb | I'll follow up with the carrier this afternoon. 我今天下午会跟进承运商。 |
| call back | /kɔːl bæk/ | phr. v. | 回电话 | call sb back；call back later | She'll call you back within an hour. 她会在一小时内回你电话。 |
| put in writing | /pʊt ɪn ˈraɪtɪŋ/ | phr. | 书面确认 | put sth in writing | Can you put that in writing? 你能书面确认一下吗？ |
| sort out | /sɔːt aʊt/ | phr. v. | 解决、处理 | sort out a problem | We'll sort out the address issue today. 我们今天会把地址问题解决。 |
| wrap up | /ræp ʌp/ | phr. v. | 收尾、结束 | wrap up the call；wrap up by five | Let's wrap up with the next steps. 我们用下一步来收尾吧。 |

put in writing 在电话里非常好用：口头说的价格、日期、责任，一句 Can you put that in writing? 就能把风险降下来。这类「一句话解决问题」的表达，比多背十个形容词有用。

## 三、语音点：定语从句在口语里怎么停

写下来的从句看起来整齐，说出口就容易糊。问题通常不在语法，而在三个地方：停顿、重音、长度。

**五条规则**

1. **限制性从句不停顿**。The person who called me was my manager 是一口气，who 前后都不停。停了，听起来像非限制性，意思会变。
2. **非限制性从句两侧各停一下**。My manager, who is based in Shanghai, will call you：逗号处换气，但不要换得太长，半拍就够。
3. **关系词弱读，不重读**。that 读 /ðət/，who 读得轻而短。重读关系词会让句子听起来像在强调「就是那个谁」，非常别扭。
4. **重音落在从句里的实词**。The report that you SENT on MONDAY is late——重音在 sent 和 Monday，不在 that 和 on。
5. **超过 8 个词的从句，口语里拆成两句**。书面能写一层套一层，口语里套两层对方就跟不上了。

**停顿示范（用斜线表示停顿）**

- My manager, / who is based in Shanghai, / will call you. （非限制性，两侧都停）
- The person who called me / was my manager. （限制性，从句内部不停，从句结束后停）
- The report that you sent on Monday / is missing page 3. （限制性，一口气到从句结束）

**正误对比**

| 说法 | 问题 | 改法 |
| --- | --- | --- |
| The person / who called me / was my manager. | 限制性从句被切成三段，听着像补充信息 | The person who called me was my manager. 一口气说完 |
| The report that YOU sent is late. | 重音落在 that 上 | The report that you SENT is late. 重音给实词 |
| The client who was responsible for the project that we discussed last week called. | 两个从句套在一起，说的人断气，听的人走神 | The client called. He was responsible for the project we discussed last week. 拆成两句 |

中文的节奏是「四个字一顿」，英文不是。逐词翻译的人会把停顿放在每个实词后面，听起来像机器人念单词；正确的停顿单位是「意群」——主语、谓语、一个完整的从句，各自成块。练习方法：先用斜线标好意群，再按斜线读，读顺了再把斜线擦掉。

**两个常见错误**

- **为了不停顿而加速**。语速一快，词尾全丢，-s 和 -ed 最先消失。正确做法是放慢、多停，不是抢时间。
- **从句里塞满细节**。90 秒的电话最多容纳 2—3 个从句，其余信息用短句说。从句是调味，不是主菜。

## 四、句型与范例

**90 秒骨架（按这个顺序演，不会超时）**

| 步骤 | 时长 | 你要说的话 | 可套句式 |
| --- | --- | --- | --- |
| 开场 | 10 s | 身份 + 来意 | This is … from …. I'm calling about …. |
| 现状 | 15 s | 发生了什么 | The order that we placed on the 12th still hasn't arrived. |
| 影响 | 15 s | 为什么急 | This is blocking the launch, which is on Friday. |
| 请求 | 15 s | 你要对方做什么 | Could you check with the carrier and confirm by noon? |
| 核对 | 15 s | 复述关键信息 | Let me read that back: …. |
| 收尾 | 10 s | 下一步 + 时间 | I'll follow up by email this afternoon. |

**8 个可套用句型**

1. This is Mei from Delta. I'm calling about the delivery on order 4471.
   我是德尔塔的梅，打电话是想问 4471 号订单的交付。
2. The order **that we placed on the 12th** still hasn't arrived.
   我们十二号下的那笔订单还没到。
3. This is blocking the launch, **which is scheduled for Friday**.
   这挡住了发布，而发布定在周五。
4. Could you check with the carrier and **confirm by noon**?
   你能和承运商确认一下，中午前给我答复吗？
5. Let me read that back: forty cartons, **delivered to Leeds**, by Wednesday.
   我复述一遍：四十箱，送到利兹，周三前。
6. Sorry, I didn't catch the site name. Could you spell it?
   抱歉，场地名没听清，能拼一下吗？
7. **What I need** is a new date I can give the client.
   我需要的是一个能告诉客户的新日期。
8. I'll follow up by email this afternoon and **put the new date in writing**.
   我今天下午邮件跟进，并把新日期书面确认。

第 7 句是主语从句，不在本周语法范围，但电话里极好用：把「我需要什么」提前，对方立刻知道重点。会说一句就够，不必展开。

## 五、练习

**A 词汇（8 题）**

1. 翻译：你能书面确认一下吗？
2. 填空：I've ______ down the new delivery date.
3. 翻译：我今天下午会跟进承运商。
4. 选词（confirm / clarify）：Let me ______ one point before we go on.
5. 翻译：她会在一小时内回你电话。
6. 填空：We'll ______ out the address issue today.
7. 翻译：我们用下一步来收尾吧。
8. 改错：I will follow up the carrier this afternoon.

**B 语音与改写（6 题）**

1. 用斜线标出停顿：My manager, who is based in Shanghai, will call you.
2. 用斜线标出停顿：The person who called me was my manager.
3. 标出重音词：The report that you sent on Monday is late.
4. 把两个从句的长句拆成两句：The client who was responsible for the project that we discussed last week called.
5. 把从句压缩到 8 词以内：The order that we placed with your team on the twelfth of this month has not arrived.
6. 下面这句哪里会让人听不明白？改一遍：This is the thing which is the reason why I am calling you today.

**C 输出（2 题）**

1. 演并录音：90 秒电话，一人分饰两角，必须用出 ≥ 6 个固定说法、≥ 2 个定语从句、1 次 read back。第 3 遍录音为成品。
2. 自评：回听成品，填下面的评分表，写下 2 个要改的地方。

## 六、参考答案

**A 组**

1. Can you put that in writing? put sth in writing 是书面确认的固定说法。
2. noted。I've noted down 用现在完成时，表示已经记下。
3. I'll follow up with the carrier this afternoon. follow up 后接 with sb 或 on sth。
4. clarify。clarify a point 是「把一点说清楚」，confirm 是「确认已定的事」。
5. She'll call you back within an hour. call sb back 代词放中间。
6. sort。sort out 是解决、处理，口语高频。
7. Let's wrap up with the next steps. wrap up with 表示以……收尾。
8. I will follow up with the carrier this afternoon. follow up 是不及物用法，必须加 with 或 on。

**B 组**

1. My manager, / who is based in Shanghai, / will call you. 非限制性两侧各停半拍。
2. The person who called me / was my manager. 从句内部不停，只在从句结束后停。
3. 重音在 SENT 和 MONDAY，that 与 on 弱读。
4. The client called. He was responsible for the project we discussed last week. 拆句后信息更清楚，也更好说。
5. The order from the 12th hasn't arrived. 用介词短语替换从句，是最实用的压缩手段。
6. 三个从句套在一起，听的人抓不住主干。改成：I'm calling about the delivery. It was due on Monday. 一句一个信息。

**评分表（每项 0—2 分，满分 10）**

| 项目 | 2 分标准 |
| --- | --- |
| 时长 | 85—95 秒，不超 100 秒 |
| 固定说法 | ≥ 6 个，位置正确 |
| 定语从句 | ≥ 2 个，无关系词错误 |
| 核对 | 至少 1 次完整 read back |
| 收尾 | 有明确动作 + 时间点 |

**C 组参考开头**（可直接改用，但成品必须是你自己的场景）：Hi, this is Mei from Delta. I'm calling about order 4471, which was due on Monday. The order that we placed on the 12th still hasn't arrived, and this is blocking the launch on Friday. Could you check with the carrier and confirm by noon?

## 七、今日输出与自查

| 检查项 | 达标线 | 怎么查 |
| --- | --- | --- |
| 提纲 | 6 行，覆盖开场到收尾 | 对照骨架表 |
| 成品录音 | 90 秒（85—100 秒之间） | 计时器 |
| 固定说法 | ≥ 6 个 | 回听打勾 |
| 定语从句 | ≥ 2 个，停顿正确 | 标出位置 |
| 词尾 | -s、-ed 能听清 | 抽 5 个动词检查 |

产出文件：`Day04_90秒电话.mp3` 与 `Day04_自评.md`（评分表 + 2 条改进）。录音里允许有停顿，不允许有「呃……那个……」超过两秒的空档；卡住就用 Sorry, let me put it another way 接过去。

评分表低于 8 分不用重录整段，只重录失分最多的那一块：固定说法不够就补两句核对，从句出错就把那句换成短句。整段重录三次以上，收益会明显下降，不如把力气留给明天的写作。

## 八、明日预告

Day 5 转到写作：100 词状态更新，3 项进展 + 1 个阻塞 + 1 个请求。今天录音里说过的「进展、阻塞、请求」，明天要压缩成书面语。写完你会发现，口语里能绕过去的地方，落到纸上一个都绕不过去。